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Write a strong thesis statement!
What is a thesis statement?
It is usually a single sentence at the end of your first paragraph that presents your
argument to the reader.
The rest of the paper, the body of the essay, gathers and organizes evidence that will
persuade the reader of the logic of your interpretation.
The thesis statement is the “road map” of your paper, directing you as you write it and guiding
the reader through it.
Do
Know your essay’s type.
Make a statement.
Make a debatable claim.
Be specific
Don’t
Announce the thesis, e.g. “This paper will discuss….”
Announce yourself, e.g. “I am going to prove that….”
Ask a question.
Leave your reader asking “How?” or “Why?”
Your history professor assigns a five page paper in which you must analyze why the North
and South fought the Civil War. What would a good thesis statement look like?
Bad:
The North and South fought the Civil War for many reasons, some of which were the same and
some different.
This statement is too general and simply rephrases the prompt. It does not answer how or why
their reasons differed.
Better:
While both sides fought the Civil War over the issue of slavery, the North fought for moral
reasons while the South fought to preserve its own institutions.
This sentence offers a more specific and debatable answer. However, it is still too broad and
insupportable. You cannot defend a claim of morality in a five pages, and good research would
probably not lead you to this conclusion.